Archaic Rising (Republic of the Five Corners #1)

Here, I will post excerpts from the novel that I am currently writing in no particular order. Some excerpts are drafts and will either be A) Used in the novel, B) Used in either a future book in the series or at a later point in the novel or C) Not used after all. They are here to showcase my writing skills and I appreciate any feedback that I can get. Please let me know via e-mail or Facebook.

One Fine Morning (A Draft of a Possible Beginning of the Book)